Wednesday, June 10, 2015

WEEK 10 BLOG FORUM TOPIC

Looking back to the response I gave on the Forum for Week One, my goals for this class were as follows: I want to be proficient in AP style, learn how to correctly prepare for interviews and stories, and know how to be concise.

If nothing else, I have improved on AP style writing. Before this class, I had not had much exposure to this style – using MLA for the most part. I have found it to be concise (another goal of mine) and have enjoyed learning it. I didn’t do too badly on the quizzes, and it came easily, so I’m assuming this is a good thing.

There were many tips in class on interview preparation, which were very helpful to me. I now know to write out the basic questions I have before an interview, but then really listen to their answers and pursue those. The ideas that they spout out are usually more helpful than the answers I plan to get.
I definitely learned how to be concise. It was actually difficult to switch from this point-by-point style, to the never-ending flow that some of my other classes required.

Although I didn't improve quite as much as I would have liked, I had every opportunity to do so, and I know more a hell of a lot more than I did before. Overall, I am happy with the tools I can take away from this course.

WEEK 7 FEATURE WRITING BLOG FORUM

1) I didn’t end up writing the profile, so I had no one to contact for this first topic. For topic two, however, I can hardly narrow it down to the two most important things I learned from him. Stephen King was certainly full of good advice.

I’d have to say that his emphasis on reading is warranted. If you don’t read other people’s work, not only are you missing out on inspiration and new ideas, but you also aren’t getting in the mood for writing.

“If you want to be a writer, you must do two things above all others: read a lot and write a lot. There's no way around these two things that I'm aware of, no shortcut.”

Going without books means you are less likely to have stories in your brain, and words on the tip of your tongue in a time of need.

I always feel more creative when I am exposed to others’ creativity.

The second thing I found helpful was that he believes that research shouldn’t overshadow the story. 

It’s so true! Too many times I have started on a story, and when I need to stop and research something, I get carried away. I spend copious amounts of time dredging through the facts and boring stuff that I will never end up needing. This either causes me to lose inspiration or I put too much dull mumbo-jumbo in a story when it wasn’t needed in the first place, simply because I spent so much time figuring it out.


2) My favorite quote from “On Writing” is as follows:

“So okay― there you are in your room with the shade down and the door shut and the plug pulled out of the base of the telephone. You've blown up your TV and committed yourself to a thousand words a day, come hell or high water. Now comes the big question: What are you going to write about? And the equally big answer: Anything you damn well want.”

If you read, write consistently, recognize good ideas, take a deep breath and just start, you can literally write about anything. I find this to be the most liberating of revelations.

Eventually, “Words create sentences; sentences create paragraphs; sometimes paragraphs quicken and begin to breathe.”


I can’t even stop quoting him. I’ll consider this a good thing.

Week 6 Blog Response

TOPIC 1:              
A column subject could be regulations on steroids in sports. My take is that they shouldn’t be used, but some others feel differently.
Links/sources:

TOPIC 2:
I think I enjoyed the story about the Girl Scout most out of the few that I read of Jennifer’s work. I liked the fact that she used several sources to make the story credible, and that she ended it with a quote. There were variations in paragraph and sentence length and she kept the wordage to a minimum.
I don’t know that this story in particular should have a follow-up. It might be a little silly. I suppose you could interview her again and asked if she stopped talking to all her old friends yet. J

Some of the questions that would be good to ask a reporter might be: Would you still choose this career knowing what you know now? What is the most outrageous story you had to cover? What is the competition like battling against other journalists for a story?  

“The Fault in Our Stars” Review – Writer’s Choice

In 2014, TIME magazine recognized John Green, along with 99 others, as being one of the most influential people in the world.

One of Green’s creations that certainly helped thrust him to this spotlight was a poignant love story rolling through the ups and downs of life for two teenagers with cancer.

Published in 2012, “The Fault in Our Stars” was the fourth novel solely written by John Green.
In the story, Hazel Grace and Augustus Waters meet at a support group, and quickly grow close to each other. Hazel’s thyroid cancer has crept to her lungs, while Augustus has been robbed of a leg by osteosarcoma.

Though not without humor, this story is full of heartbreak. The main characters are relatable, as we watch Hazel fall in love with Augustus while continuing to struggle with her disease. As with Augustus’ character, the reality is that sometimes people don’t stay strong. An article from The New York Times states, “Over the course of the narrative, his appealing exterior breaks down; his flaws, fears and humiliations are exposed, yet he is all the more lovable for his frailty and heartbreaking humanity.”

John Green once said “all good American literature is always interested in people who are ambiguously heroic,” and that’s how he constructed these characters.

The article from The New York Times goes on to sum it up perfectly.

“’The Fault in Our Stars’ is all the more heart-rending for its bluntness about the medical realities of cancer. There are harrowing descriptions of pain, shame, anger and bodily fluids of every type. It is a narrative without rainbows or flamingoes; there are no magical summer snowstorms. Instead, Hazel has to lug a portable oxygen tank with her wherever she goes, and Gus has a prosthetic leg. Their friend Isaac is missing an eye and later goes blind. These unpleasant details do nothing to diminish the romance; in Green’s hands, they only make it more moving. He shows us true love — two teenagers helping and accepting each other through the most humiliating physical and emotional ordeals — and it is far more romantic than any sunset on the beach.”

When asked in an interview for Goodreads what his inspiration was for the book, Green described meeting a young girl with thyroid cancer named Esther in 2009. The impact she made on him motivated the novel.

“I knew I wanted to write a story about sick kids, but I was so angry, so furious with the world that these terrible things could happen, and they weren't even rare or uncommon, and I think in the end for the first ten years or so I never could write it because I was just too angry, and I wasn't able to capture the complexity of the world. I wanted the book to be funny. I wanted the book to be unsentimental. After meeting Esther, I felt very differently about whether a short life could be a rich life.”

In The New Yorker, it states: “Most Y.A. readers are girls, but because Green is male and his first books featured boys as protagonists his new novel seemed capable of reaching both genders. “Stars” is a love story, but Strauss-Gabel successfully pushed for a cover that did not look like a traditional Y.A. romance: no pink, no photograph of a pretty girl. Instead, the title dominates, and the background is blue.”

From this, we can derive that there is no logical reason why any respectable reader would carry this manuscript around feeling anything less than proud.

In an article about John Green previously mentioned from TIME magazine, it says “Some say that through his books, John gives a voice to teenagers. I humbly disagree. I think John hears the voices of teenagers. He acknowledges the intelligence and vulnerability that stem from those beautiful years when we are, for the first time, discovering the world and ourselves outside of our familial stories.”

That is what makes stories like “The Fault in Our Stars” so powerful.

Other works of John Green include the books “Looking for Alaska,” “Paper Towns,” and “An Abundance of Katherines.” This talented man is not just a novelist, however. He became popular on the YouTube channel that he and his brother (Hank Green) started in 2007 called VlogBrothers. Together, they have also generated instructive episodes covering sciences, literature and history which they call Crash Course.

A quote near the beginning of “The Fault in Our Stars” declares, “Sometimes, you read a book and it fills you with this weird evangelical zeal, and you become convinced that the shattered world will never be put back together unless and until all living humans read the book.”

“The Fault in Our Stars” is one of those books.

At a Glance:
Grade for book: A+
Available where: Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Target

John Green Information: Twitter at @JohnGreen, Facebook at JohnGreenFans, Instagram at @JohnGreenWritesBooks