Wednesday, June 10, 2015

WEEK 10 BLOG FORUM TOPIC

Looking back to the response I gave on the Forum for Week One, my goals for this class were as follows: I want to be proficient in AP style, learn how to correctly prepare for interviews and stories, and know how to be concise.

If nothing else, I have improved on AP style writing. Before this class, I had not had much exposure to this style – using MLA for the most part. I have found it to be concise (another goal of mine) and have enjoyed learning it. I didn’t do too badly on the quizzes, and it came easily, so I’m assuming this is a good thing.

There were many tips in class on interview preparation, which were very helpful to me. I now know to write out the basic questions I have before an interview, but then really listen to their answers and pursue those. The ideas that they spout out are usually more helpful than the answers I plan to get.
I definitely learned how to be concise. It was actually difficult to switch from this point-by-point style, to the never-ending flow that some of my other classes required.

Although I didn't improve quite as much as I would have liked, I had every opportunity to do so, and I know more a hell of a lot more than I did before. Overall, I am happy with the tools I can take away from this course.

WEEK 7 FEATURE WRITING BLOG FORUM

1) I didn’t end up writing the profile, so I had no one to contact for this first topic. For topic two, however, I can hardly narrow it down to the two most important things I learned from him. Stephen King was certainly full of good advice.

I’d have to say that his emphasis on reading is warranted. If you don’t read other people’s work, not only are you missing out on inspiration and new ideas, but you also aren’t getting in the mood for writing.

“If you want to be a writer, you must do two things above all others: read a lot and write a lot. There's no way around these two things that I'm aware of, no shortcut.”

Going without books means you are less likely to have stories in your brain, and words on the tip of your tongue in a time of need.

I always feel more creative when I am exposed to others’ creativity.

The second thing I found helpful was that he believes that research shouldn’t overshadow the story. 

It’s so true! Too many times I have started on a story, and when I need to stop and research something, I get carried away. I spend copious amounts of time dredging through the facts and boring stuff that I will never end up needing. This either causes me to lose inspiration or I put too much dull mumbo-jumbo in a story when it wasn’t needed in the first place, simply because I spent so much time figuring it out.


2) My favorite quote from “On Writing” is as follows:

“So okay― there you are in your room with the shade down and the door shut and the plug pulled out of the base of the telephone. You've blown up your TV and committed yourself to a thousand words a day, come hell or high water. Now comes the big question: What are you going to write about? And the equally big answer: Anything you damn well want.”

If you read, write consistently, recognize good ideas, take a deep breath and just start, you can literally write about anything. I find this to be the most liberating of revelations.

Eventually, “Words create sentences; sentences create paragraphs; sometimes paragraphs quicken and begin to breathe.”


I can’t even stop quoting him. I’ll consider this a good thing.

Week 6 Blog Response

TOPIC 1:              
A column subject could be regulations on steroids in sports. My take is that they shouldn’t be used, but some others feel differently.
Links/sources:

TOPIC 2:
I think I enjoyed the story about the Girl Scout most out of the few that I read of Jennifer’s work. I liked the fact that she used several sources to make the story credible, and that she ended it with a quote. There were variations in paragraph and sentence length and she kept the wordage to a minimum.
I don’t know that this story in particular should have a follow-up. It might be a little silly. I suppose you could interview her again and asked if she stopped talking to all her old friends yet. J

Some of the questions that would be good to ask a reporter might be: Would you still choose this career knowing what you know now? What is the most outrageous story you had to cover? What is the competition like battling against other journalists for a story?  

“The Fault in Our Stars” Review – Writer’s Choice

In 2014, TIME magazine recognized John Green, along with 99 others, as being one of the most influential people in the world.

One of Green’s creations that certainly helped thrust him to this spotlight was a poignant love story rolling through the ups and downs of life for two teenagers with cancer.

Published in 2012, “The Fault in Our Stars” was the fourth novel solely written by John Green.
In the story, Hazel Grace and Augustus Waters meet at a support group, and quickly grow close to each other. Hazel’s thyroid cancer has crept to her lungs, while Augustus has been robbed of a leg by osteosarcoma.

Though not without humor, this story is full of heartbreak. The main characters are relatable, as we watch Hazel fall in love with Augustus while continuing to struggle with her disease. As with Augustus’ character, the reality is that sometimes people don’t stay strong. An article from The New York Times states, “Over the course of the narrative, his appealing exterior breaks down; his flaws, fears and humiliations are exposed, yet he is all the more lovable for his frailty and heartbreaking humanity.”

John Green once said “all good American literature is always interested in people who are ambiguously heroic,” and that’s how he constructed these characters.

The article from The New York Times goes on to sum it up perfectly.

“’The Fault in Our Stars’ is all the more heart-rending for its bluntness about the medical realities of cancer. There are harrowing descriptions of pain, shame, anger and bodily fluids of every type. It is a narrative without rainbows or flamingoes; there are no magical summer snowstorms. Instead, Hazel has to lug a portable oxygen tank with her wherever she goes, and Gus has a prosthetic leg. Their friend Isaac is missing an eye and later goes blind. These unpleasant details do nothing to diminish the romance; in Green’s hands, they only make it more moving. He shows us true love — two teenagers helping and accepting each other through the most humiliating physical and emotional ordeals — and it is far more romantic than any sunset on the beach.”

When asked in an interview for Goodreads what his inspiration was for the book, Green described meeting a young girl with thyroid cancer named Esther in 2009. The impact she made on him motivated the novel.

“I knew I wanted to write a story about sick kids, but I was so angry, so furious with the world that these terrible things could happen, and they weren't even rare or uncommon, and I think in the end for the first ten years or so I never could write it because I was just too angry, and I wasn't able to capture the complexity of the world. I wanted the book to be funny. I wanted the book to be unsentimental. After meeting Esther, I felt very differently about whether a short life could be a rich life.”

In The New Yorker, it states: “Most Y.A. readers are girls, but because Green is male and his first books featured boys as protagonists his new novel seemed capable of reaching both genders. “Stars” is a love story, but Strauss-Gabel successfully pushed for a cover that did not look like a traditional Y.A. romance: no pink, no photograph of a pretty girl. Instead, the title dominates, and the background is blue.”

From this, we can derive that there is no logical reason why any respectable reader would carry this manuscript around feeling anything less than proud.

In an article about John Green previously mentioned from TIME magazine, it says “Some say that through his books, John gives a voice to teenagers. I humbly disagree. I think John hears the voices of teenagers. He acknowledges the intelligence and vulnerability that stem from those beautiful years when we are, for the first time, discovering the world and ourselves outside of our familial stories.”

That is what makes stories like “The Fault in Our Stars” so powerful.

Other works of John Green include the books “Looking for Alaska,” “Paper Towns,” and “An Abundance of Katherines.” This talented man is not just a novelist, however. He became popular on the YouTube channel that he and his brother (Hank Green) started in 2007 called VlogBrothers. Together, they have also generated instructive episodes covering sciences, literature and history which they call Crash Course.

A quote near the beginning of “The Fault in Our Stars” declares, “Sometimes, you read a book and it fills you with this weird evangelical zeal, and you become convinced that the shattered world will never be put back together unless and until all living humans read the book.”

“The Fault in Our Stars” is one of those books.

At a Glance:
Grade for book: A+
Available where: Amazon, Barnes & Noble, Target

John Green Information: Twitter at @JohnGreen, Facebook at JohnGreenFans, Instagram at @JohnGreenWritesBooks

Sunday, April 26, 2015

Week 3 Blog Post

Topic 1:
For my first story, I got in touch with Lex Porter. He was impressed with the story, and happy with how it turned out. There were no errors.

Topic 2:
My review is going to be about the recently released album “Handwritten” by Shawn Mendes.

The sources I plan to use for my review are articles from Rolling Stone, Billboard, and USA Today. And myself, of course! There are so many articles being written about him – it’s easy to find different perspectives on him because he is such a sensation all of a sudden.  


This kid just started on Vine and suddenly, everyone knows about him and he is top of the charts at a really young age. Surprisingly, his music isn’t half-bad. I would say it beats out Bieber by bucket-loads. It’s big news because he’s so young, and at maximum popularity right now. 

Friday, April 24, 2015

Week 4 Blog Post

Topic 1:

One of the tools I used in my first story about the dance club was vocabulary (no duh). Stephen King says that a basic rule of vocabulary is that you use the first word that comes to your mind, as long as it is appropriate and colorful.

“Light cascaded into the open studio space as the dancers within it stepped and spun to a song within their heads.”

In this example, I created an image I wanted my readers to see without getting too carried away with every single word and the need for it to stand out. Sometimes the message can get across better when it’s simple.

While I didn’t straight-up use fragments, I did vary my sentence length to keep it fresh. Longer sentences made up most of the review of “Handwritten.”

“He started out as an ordinary Vine user – singing a few seconds worth of songs and started accumulating quite a following, after which Mendes started posting on YouTube.”

But every once and a while I would throw in something short and sweet:

“It’s worth a listen.”

Topic 2:

I have decided to use Deb Powell as the subject of my profile. I will ask if I can shadow her for part of a day while she works and ask a couple questions. Ideally, I will be able to talk to a couple of people she has helped with Love INC., and some members of her family, as well.

Questions I ask will include: What does Love INC. do/ what’s their mission? What does a typical day as executive director look like for Deb? What’s the most rewarding part? How to get involved/volunteer at Love INC.? Do they take donations? Contact info?

Her claim to fame would be that she is the executive director of Linn County’s Love INC.

Links:

Review - "Handwritten" by Shawn Mendes

Sometimes the greatest stars come from the most humble and unexpected beginnings. 

Shawn Mendes, a musician rapidly rising in popularity, is no exception.

He started out as an ordinary Vine user – singing a few seconds worth of songs and started accumulating quite a following, after which Mendes started posting on YouTube.

On April 14, 2015, the sixteen-year-old Canadian released his debut album titled “Handwritten,” which was a giant step in his musical career. Within the first week, 119,000 copies were sold, putting it at number one on the US Billboard 200.

The songs are full of emotion – a mix of bouncy, happy tunes and songs filled with sorrow. Though the singer may be young and inexperienced, his songs don’t blare complete immaturity, and the sound of the album is not near as bumpy as it may have been expected to be.

According to an article from Rolling Stone, "His debut album presents him as a nice-guy guitar strummer…influenced by the light acoustic pop of Ed Sheeran. And, like the British teen idol, Mendes has more rhythm than you'd expect (note the Nelly singsong flows on "Aftertaste"). 

In an interview with Billboard we find that Mendes does indeed try to mold himself after Sheeran. “‘His whole style is not fake at all,’ says Mendes. ‘That’s how I want to be.’” 

Though I am not sure that there could ever be another quite like Ed Sheeran, his words are flattering to the star and give us a glimpse of Mendes’ musical direction.

USA Today was accurate in saying that “In his songs, Mendes comes across as ultra-sensitive and appealingly self-deprecating. In one song, he sings about needing help with long division. ‘Maybe I'm just a kid in love,’ he sings in another, setting up the punch line: ‘If this is what it's like falling in love, then I don't ever want to grow up.’”

The artist is aware that he has some growing up to do, and that strikes me as more appealing than young musicians trying to fake life experience.

There is some criticism, however. According to a review from Idolator, “He’s written more ballads than upbeat songs, and features instruments instead of electronica, as if that’s enough to show that he’s being ‘real.’ As hard as he tries, though, this album doesn’t have the same warm intimacy of those vines from his bedroom and bathroom in Pickering, Ontario.”

Well, we can’t all be perfect. I honestly haven’t heard many debut albums with as much passion and as little mistakes as this.

It’s a new sound from a fresh voice that, by the way, is the youngest since 2010 to make top of the Billboard 200.

It’s worth a listen.

At a Glance:
Grade for album: B+
Available where: iTunesSpotifyGoogle Play
Songs in album: 16
Produced by: Island Records
Lowdown: The youngest since 2010 to take the lead in the Billboard 200, Shawn Mendes’ album “Handwritten” is one you need to listen to.